A Joyful Picnic

On a page in Writings I've posted a story written three years ago when I was still in the "no means no" way of thinking. In recent months I've come to realize for some couples where consent is implied from previous interactions and communication this scenario may be fine but, if the relationship were fairly new there may be some ways to better make this scene just as sexy while also bringing consent into it. Here is a link to A Joyful Picnic. Please propose some edits to make the consent more explicit as if the couple were fairly newly together.